Jake’s mouse hand shook from the torrid action of his wank hand. He clicked the “next” tile at the bottom of the FatnSlippery.com member’s gallery, and stepped up the pace another notch. The canary yellow sock flopped, still empty, as his wrist chugged madly along his thigh, the rapid thwacking of his balls against the wooden chair giving him painful pleasure.
“Next” had left behind Vikki and given him Maggie, a flesh mountain of sin. Maggie toyed with some apparently secret region of pleasure that was concealed by mounds of stretched, fat-engorged flesh, her heavy breasts detected in the confused landscape of her torso only by the presence of nipples. He was on a mission. Thwackthwackthwack …
Next.
Candi’s amorphous, stressed flab found its own level. She coated the divan, her erotic semi-pose sending Jake into spasms of desire. Usually, he could fantasize over one or two of these luscious, naked heavyweights before spending his load, but this time it was apparent that he wasn’t going to get it done in time for vespers. He called it quits, straightened his robe, and returned the sock to his foot, surprised when his large toe located a tiny dollop of early release.
Date Written: May 18, 2004 Author:Cooper Green Average Vote: 3
Comments:
05/25/2004TheBuyer: But there's no wine in this short...wha'happened?
05/25/2004Ferucio P. Chhretan (3): Perhaps Cooper Green doesn't like wine.
05/25/2004Will Disney (3): Gross! 3.5!
05/25/2004anonymous: "Author: [not shown yet]": So you're guessing, right?
05/25/2004Mr. Pony: Oh, no, he's not! The guest profile page of Cooper Green (Guest Shorts > Guests/Stats > Cooper Green) reveals the comments below, under the heading "Recently Posted User Feedback for Shorts by Cooper Green:" This is a bug, I think! Good work, Ferucio!
05/25/2004Mr. Pony (4): 3.5!
05/25/2004TheBuyer (3): Damnit, I didn't know you could do actual detective work! I owe you Slocum. 3 and change
05/25/2004John Slocum: TheBuyer: I'm going to make you pay.
05/25/2004John Slocum: I would never use the word "Thwack"
05/25/2004TheBuyer: John, note the time of the comment. I was good and hammered.
05/25/2004John Slocum: I'm worried about your alcohol intake, I'm scared you're self destructing.
05/25/2004Mr. Pony: Also, are you getting enough sleep?
05/25/2004TheBuyer: Don't be scared, you're way outside the blast radius. Plus I'm on the wagon for the rest of the month - strictly weed.
05/25/2004TheBuyer: Pony: not even half. You saw the Zombie thing, I thought it was hil-larious Jerry until I realised it was just the alcohol induced, sleep deprived ramblings of a man with too many good friends who are undead sex-trade workers; I'm not the cleric I used to be.
05/25/2004Ferucio P. Chhretan: Saving throw!
05/25/2004TheBuyer: I would have tried my Staff of Fucking +2 but I'm saving it for a real emergency.
05/25/2004TheBuyer: Alright, Geek Check. Also, Cooper, from one newbie to another, I'm glad you've decided to submit more short[s?], keep it up; you've spawned some pretty good dialogue, don't be afraid to stick your wick in it.
05/25/2004Cooper Green: Thanks for the welcome TheBuyer (and Mr. Pony too, belatedly), but I think my wick is the last thing I will be posting.
05/26/2004Mr. Pony: Wow...Mind if I ask why?
05/26/2004Cooper Green: I need it for my next short.
05/26/2004Pix (2): I would have tried my Staff of Fucking +2 but I'm saving it for a real emergency. My tongue hurts I am biting it so hard. The short is so so, kinda anti climactic after visions of heavy men in bathtubs, but I'm really only here for the comments anyways.