It was time.
He'd been caught.
He couldn't run to it.
He couldn't run from it.
So he brought out the power tools and made her scream.
Date Written: May 15, 2004 Author:Pix Average Vote: 1.6667
Comments:
05/20/2004Will Disney: kinda creepy, right?
05/20/2004Pix: Disney:It depends on your perspective... For you yes.
05/20/2004John Slocum (1): I'll get started here, 1.1!
05/20/2004Jon Matza: Author: did you really think this would be well-received?
05/20/2004anonymous: John.. Your right, this short is not nearly as misogynistic or sexist as it ought to be. I'll try harder next time, or maybe I'll just shove something up someones ass and call it a day.
05/20/2004Dylan Danko (1): Yoo hoo, over here sailor!
05/20/2004Will Disney: it is creepy for me - but i think this was submitted by a new guest author so listen: congratulations and welcome to the acmeshorts shitstorm! try to remember that we're all a bunch of idiots here, except Matza, and so don't take things too personally...
05/20/2004Jon Matza: Don't you belittle me, Disney!
05/20/2004anonymous: Thank you for the welcome Disney. This short tells 2 totally different stories all depending on who the reader is and how thier mind works. As for the shitstorm. It is 100% expected and accepted. I've been lurking awhile.
05/20/2004Ewan Snow: I see that this is now an inside short. Maybe if it had been marked as such in the morning people might have refrained from dumping on it. It seems more or less meaningless to me, but I guess I'm not on the inside...
05/20/2004TheBuyer: o dear...now I get it...o dear.
05/20/2004anonymous: Snow: It was, then it wasn't and now it is again. I'm Schizophrenic at the best of times.
05/20/2004TheBuyer (3): vibrator joke, speaking of sticking things into asses
05/20/2004Mr. Pony: Oh my goodness!
05/21/2004Ferucio P. Chhretan: Schizophrenic with a capital "s"?