His double chin dripped of watery sour cream. Three day stubble poked through the not so creamy mush that was now dribbling down his neck. He picked his nose. Getting a good one he sneered at it in approval, wiping it under the red and yellow table. He glanced around the room as a mere afterthought.
The minumum caste earner stared at him, mop in hand. Now looking like more like a prop. Holding him back from throttling this fat maggot with all that he had...
Date Written: January 18, 2004 Author:Joseph Keith Average Vote: 3
Comments:
01/26/2004Will Disney (3): this one is sort of creepy!
01/26/2004Joseph Keith: yeah...red and yellow kinda clash. :)
01/27/2004Ewan Snow (3): The first few sentences are pretty funny, but it sort of dwindles after that.