The old samurai
Drew his katana and shit
His hakama pants.
Date Written: August 16, 2005 Author:Kenji X Average Vote: 1.57143
Comments:
08/24/2005The Rid (1): Look! It's a haiku!
08/24/2005TheBuyer: o man.
08/24/2005TheBuyer (5):
08/24/2005Litcube: Lookit! It is a haiku!
I was hoping the second line was going to pertain to the ancient Japanese art of iaijutsu, where the samurai would attack with his katana or wakizashi in one fluid motion from the scabbard!.
I don't like how the second line of this haiku is supposed to flow with the third line. That's not very haikuish.
Perhaps if this were intended, the "and" would have been replaced with an "'n". Alas, the author lets hang the sentence and runs it into the third phrase. That makes me itch.
08/24/2005Streifenbeuteldachs (1.5): I still don't get why Japanese cultural shit is so popular.
08/24/2005qualcomm (0.5): the lowest rating
i ask disney once again
zero-star votes, please
08/24/2005Litcube (2):
08/24/2005The Rid: My God, TheBuyer. 5 stars? The only reason I didn't give this 1/2 a star is because it's so mercifully fucking short.
08/24/2005scoop: Hey, what's a haiku?
A hai what? I don't know, dude.
Whatever. Pass the weed.
08/24/2005TheBuyer: Tree is back from the dead, I'm still logged in at my old job.
08/24/2005TheBuyer: Jesus fuck. I can't believe you tried to do that again. FUCK!!
08/24/2005Mr. Pony: This short makes me angry at the entire world that eventually led to the short's creation.
08/24/2005Cyrus: This is bad.
08/24/2005The Fonch (0.5): goddamn right it's bad.
08/24/2005Cyrus (0.5): forget to register my opinion with "STARS"
I don't like how the second line of this haiku is supposed to flow with the third line. That's not very haikuish. Perhaps if this were intended, the "and" would have been replaced with an "'n". Alas, the author lets hang the sentence and runs it into the third phrase. That makes me itch.
i ask disney once again
zero-star votes, please
A hai what? I don't know, dude.
Whatever. Pass the weed.