Johnny contemplated the prostitute before him. She was old, maybe 45, whithered, lined and fat.
"Take it all off, please," said Johnny.
The prostitute complied, removing her tattered rags. Her pussy lips went thunk against the floor. Johnny wondered how she came to be in such bad shape. An alcoholic pimp? An alcoholic herself? Certainly not a crack whore; she was too heavy for that.
Johnny made a twirling motion in the air with his finger. As the prostitute turned 360 degrees, he said, "Only respond when I call you Delilah. Okay, Delilah?"
"You got it, baby," cooed Delilah, as much as she could coo with the larynx of a three-pack-a-day smoker. "What do you want me to do?"
"Everything," he said. "And I want it done by a woman with experience. I'm sick of young girls and their lack of expertise. What with all your wisdom and experience, I expect the fuck of my life from you, Delilah."
She nodded. "Wisdom and experience I got, hon." She pulled his cock out and rubbed it against her clit. Her vaginal aroma was surprisingly sweet, her cunthole surprisingly tight. He already knew it would be the fuck of his life. She coughed up a wad of phlegm and got to work.
Date Written: July 29, 2005 Author:The Rid Average Vote: 4.08333
Comments:
08/2/2005Will Disney (4): No comments yet, huh? I like that this one is so completely unappetizing.
08/2/2005anonymous: Thanks, Disney.
08/2/2005Jon Matza: Whoa--is it just me or is this woman eerily similar to Candy? I wrote & submitted that short a mere 36 hours ago... spooky-ooky, much?
08/2/2005anonymous: I submitted this short 96 hours ago...still spooky-ooky much? That said, she's quite similar to Candy. You are correct, sir!
08/2/2005Jon Matza: I didn't mean to imply mine was written first or that idea theft was going on...just that the timing was a cherry little coincidence (you wobbling clot).
08/2/2005anonymous: Yes, I understood that. Hence my note "That said, she's quite similar to Candy. You are correct, sir!" I think it's part of my youngest child need to always be right.
08/2/2005anonymous: Or maybe to get the last word.
08/2/2005anonymous: I need help.
08/2/2005Klause Muppet (4): Hi Author! I like your story.
08/2/2005Mr. Pony (4): I liked it when her stuff hit the ground.
08/2/2005anonymous: Thank you, Klause! And thank you, Mr. Pony!
08/2/2005Partytime (4): The thing about a doll like this: she won't laugh at the crook in your staff. I like "lined and fat" and the whole Jabba the Hutt feel of the whore.
08/3/2005Kenji X (4.5): I puked as I was masturbating to this short. Best pop ever.
08/3/2005Litcube (4): This was ok, Ridster. May I suggest that we refrain from resorting to shocking/disgusting the guest audience as our guest pipe comes to a guest dribble? Because we've all seen this before. For what this was worth (nigh considerable), three point five + point five for execution, Big Guy!
08/3/2005The Rid: Litcube, though I appreciate your sentiment (truly!), I like the shocking-as-banal-occurrence stuff. Can you forgive me?
08/3/2005Litcube: Oh, I'm not complaining at all (you're forgiven). I did give this four stars, after all.
08/3/2005The Rid: Indeed you did, Litcube. Indeed you did.