I was born and raised in Wet Virginia... I mean West Vagina... I mean Wet Vagina...
The Mountain State.
Date Written: March 24, 2005 Author:cromagnon Average Vote: 2.5
Comments:
03/30/2005Litcube: Oh dear.
03/30/2005The Rid (1): Right.
03/30/2005Ewan Snow: The last line is good. This is not a one in my so called book.
03/30/2005Dylan Danko: Yeah, I kinda laughed I have to admit.
03/30/2005The Rid: It was an emotional response. Based on Litcube's vote on Pony's short this A.M., I assumed emotional responses were acceptable. Alright, Cock-Smoke?
03/30/2005The Rid: I was kidding about the Cock-Smoke bit, by the way.
03/30/2005Klause Muppet: Perhaps I should of added an extra * Author. I'm sorry. I re-read this a few times; laughed the 2nd time, smiled the third. The simplicity confused me.
03/30/2005Ewan Snow (4): "The Mountain State" is funny. I like to encourage ultra short shorts, even if they're not ideal. I'd rather read a two star one liner than a three star 500 worder.
03/30/2005The Rid: Snow, I can agree on that sentiment.
03/30/2005Litcube (3): So would I, Snow. That said, this still isn't four star material in my eyes.
03/30/2005Ewan Snow: Yeah, but what the hell. Stars are as cheap as life itself.
03/30/2005Litcube: I'm going to contemplate that for a while.
03/30/2005Partytime: Cheap stars are fallin'
From Snow's sky
Cheap whores are drawlin'
Fresh ho pie
In the state of mounting wet vagina
In the mountain state of West Virgina
no virgin rides
on them country roads
take me home
to the place
that I love
back to cuntry's roads
awhaw
03/30/2005Ewan Snow: I wouldn't bother if I were you. I meant it literally, like the guy in Sparticus.
From Snow's sky
Cheap whores are drawlin'
Fresh ho pie
In the state of mounting wet vagina
In the mountain state of West Virgina
no virgin rides
on them country roads
take me home
to the place
that I love
back to cuntry's roads
awhaw